越努力越贫穷 真正层次高的人,精力都放在这3件事情上

原句：

"The sun was setting, casting a golden glow over the city. People hurried home, their faces lit by the warm light. In the park, children played, their laughter echoing in the evening air."

改写润色：

"As the day waned, the sun dipped below the horizon, its rays painting the metropolis in a regal hue of gold. The denizens of the city hastened towards their abodes, their visages illuminated by the tender radiance. Within the verdant confines of the park, the youthful inhabitants engaged in playful antics, their mirthful peals resonating through the tranquil twilight."

请提供原文，越努力越贫穷 真正层次高的人,精力都放在这3件事情上以便我能够进行具体的改写润色。